Cobwebs
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| Author | rocket_thumped |
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| Tags | action author:rocket_thumped featured ghosty hard memory playable rated |
| Created | 2010-07-11 |
| Last Modified | 2010-08-19 |
| Rating |
4 by 39 people.
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| Description | 
My last ghosty entry. Watch out for the spiders. |
This map was featured on 2010-08-09
Where are you? A place you've never been.
Walk up a corridor. Look, cobwebs everywhere.
Nothing moves. A quiet room.
You hear doors. Many doors, opening.
Closer.
Be careful. More than just little spiders lurk in these halls.
Something shiny. Is there more? Yes.
A platform. A different room. You are confused.
Something brushes past your leg. Goosebumps.
Closer.
A shriek. Some awful sound.
A little angel. Almost unnoticeable. Then more.
The angels are fast. Very fast.
Run. Run for your life.
Too close.
— al__cair__raheakallan
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Comments
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2010-09-27
press caps lock
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2010-09-27
n_14.exe
N GAME AT GIVING THE ERROR LEVEL EDIT IT IS LOCKING WHEN I CLICK IT WILL CONTINUE TO LIGHT AND LITTLE MORE BECAUSE I ASVEZES FuuuuSION TESTO Clik on U.S. (P) PLAYNING CONTINUE LEVEL
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2010-08-25
Very scary
Yeah I did it! But I didn't take the demo data because I have some problems on edit mode,anyway the introduction really scared me!
However a good review
However a good review
2010-08-19
1st
2010-08-15
That is a good review
really
2010-08-12
Okay
Thank you squibbles, for appreciating my review.
I see what you mean, wumbla. Sorry, for grouping you in on my statement. If you were referring to amlt's earlier statement, then my comment didn't relate to you.
atob, I partially agree with your statement. Numacon is well judged, in my opinion. I disagree somewhat with your opinion of al_cair's review. It didn't do much for me, but it does relate to the map.
I agree. With you. Maxson. The periods. Make it. Difficult. To follow.
I think everyone is biased.
I see what you mean, wumbla. Sorry, for grouping you in on my statement. If you were referring to amlt's earlier statement, then my comment didn't relate to you.
atob, I partially agree with your statement. Numacon is well judged, in my opinion. I disagree somewhat with your opinion of al_cair's review. It didn't do much for me, but it does relate to the map.
I agree. With you. Maxson. The periods. Make it. Difficult. To follow.
I think everyone is biased.
2010-08-11
I don't believe I do
However if I do, I'm not a staff member so it wouldn't really matter much.
2010-08-11
Creative map!
I really enjoyed the floorguard mechanic.
2010-08-11
Just as you
are a bit bias and pointless a lot of the time?
I gave it a 2 as it's too awkward. It's a good concept, but not one that's worth a high rating.
I have nothing against anyone here, I just think some of the things done by the staff are a bit bias and pointless.
I have nothing against anyone here, I just think some of the things done by the staff are a bit bias and pointless.
2010-08-11
It was mostly a joke.
Mostly.
2010-08-10
I didn't really say that though
like, I /never/ specified what it was that I liked about it until then. O_o
2010-08-10
You've already said that squibbles.
Is there any reason to further push your awful taste on us? ;)
2010-08-10
I have to say, I disagree ATOB
while your points on the commonness of such writing is a valid thing to point out, I really like how the writing style itself matches the map. The short sentaces create a rushed feeling (in the reading, not the writing), which portray a feeling of panic, and desperate flight. This, I think, really strongly applies to this map.
2010-08-10
@squibbles
Yeah, I'm not the best with grammar but thanksanyways for the feedback
2010-08-10
: )
My comment was basically what I thought the review reminded me of, it's not a review, it's a quote from Doctor Who.
<3 flag
<3 flag
2010-08-10
AMLT
on his blind crusade against the NUMA hierarchy that exists above him, that exists - with obviously nothing better to do with its collective net-time - in a state of perpetual oppression against him, has yet again overlooked the obvious.
This review was written for the winner of last month's NUMACON. That an admin won it has no bearing; it was deemed by many (staff and un-staff alike), to bear merit enough for the win.
The review itself, imo, is a very contrived attempt at post-modernism that remains ineffective and sterile in its attempts to portray atmosphere or relevant links.
Poor show, all round... aside from r_t's map, which remains excellent.
This review was written for the winner of last month's NUMACON. That an admin won it has no bearing; it was deemed by many (staff and un-staff alike), to bear merit enough for the win.
The review itself, imo, is a very contrived attempt at post-modernism that remains ineffective and sterile in its attempts to portray atmosphere or relevant links.
Poor show, all round... aside from r_t's map, which remains excellent.
2010-08-10
AMLT is right...
I would say that my review isn't even a review either, but because of certain complications surrounding the substance of my review, I won't hold myself accountable.
2010-08-10
IMO
This was one of the best reviews that were written. The only one that could possibly have been better was Ratatat's one.
Wumbla's was conceptually good, and I liked what he was doing with it, but had quite a few gramatical errors, and thus I could not bring myself to vote for it.
Wumbla's was conceptually good, and I liked what he was doing with it, but had quite a few gramatical errors, and thus I could not bring myself to vote for it.
2010-08-10
Congrats ACR
btw. :p
2010-08-10
Daw!
Shucks!
2010-08-10
I agree this isn't a great review.
But I had four to tiebreaker between, and I liked this one most. So I advise that you try to enjoy the excellent map, despite your moral outrage at the idea of creative reviewing.
2010-08-10
Wouldn't it be better if you admin peeps...
...picked out a map you saw as feature-worthy that wasn't one of your own?
Reviews aren't even reviews any more. They seem to be what people think a map's description should read.
Reviews aren't even reviews any more. They seem to be what people think a map's description should read.
2010-08-10
[b]
Map surpasses review.
2010-08-10
@ratatat
I meant that the little ammount said about the map, wasn't enough, after reading it, to get me to play the map; which I thought was the whole concept behind reviews
2010-08-10
AMLT,
and wumbla.
Many works of literature can be summed up in a few short sentences. Does that mean they are sub-standard? The review wasn't incredible, and it wasn't bad.
Some of the others were better in my opinion, but it's not my choice.
Many works of literature can be summed up in a few short sentences. Does that mean they are sub-standard? The review wasn't incredible, and it wasn't bad.
Some of the others were better in my opinion, but it's not my choice.
2010-08-09
Ehm...
kiaora.
You. Are. Late.
You. Are. Late.
2010-08-09
review......
And that's it, I'm afraid. There's no more from you on the transcript, that's the last I've got. I don't know what stopped you talking but I can guess: they're coming. The angels are coming for you, but listen, your life could depend on this; don't blink. Don't even blink. Blink and you're dead. They are fast, faster than you could believe. Don't turn your back, don't look away, and don't blink! Good luck.
2010-08-09
Creature Feature goes to hell
Reviewers constantly miss or dont sign up at all, but admin's map from admin's own contest gets a guarentee! All it right with the world again.
tiki854
The teleporters