Broken Sunlight
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| Author | Carrageenan |
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| Tags | author:carrageenan race rated |
| Created | 2012-08-10 |
| Last Modified | 2012-08-10 |
| Rating |
4 by 6 people.
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| Description | My first race! ~*~*~ |
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2012-08-11
My nickname is like here.
It's Nudel_
2012-08-11
I have IRC!
I found out about it not long ago, what is your nickname? I can be on in a second.
2012-08-11
Carrageenan,
are you on mIRC / skype etc. I'd really like to make a collab race with you. Could be a good experience. :)
2012-08-10
WOW!
I leave and come backs with LOTS of feedback! I really appreciate all of this, guys. I will definitely be reading this and using the info to help my future maps.
2012-08-10
SLOW SPEEDRUN
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2012-08-10
Heh
I squeezed through there anyways :P
Not too shabby, but I agree with Meta, the race could have been a little more challenging; the chainguns in particular didn't really feel all the threatening.
It was fun though ^^ 4
Not too shabby, but I agree with Meta, the race could have been a little more challenging; the chainguns in particular didn't really feel all the threatening.
It was fun though ^^ 4
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2012-08-10
AGD
I don't think you did it right, lsudny. o_o The flow didn't really feel choppy to me.
Not a bad race for your first. (Much better than my first). Much of the flow felt a bit too straightforward and automatic to me, although that part where it looks like you are meant to squeeze through was a good deception... My biggest suggestion would be to try to make completing a race correctly a little more challenging - whether you do that by obscuring the flow a bit more, by making parts of the flow tougher to pull off, or something else, is up to you.
Not a bad race for your first. (Much better than my first). Much of the flow felt a bit too straightforward and automatic to me, although that part where it looks like you are meant to squeeze through was a good deception... My biggest suggestion would be to try to make completing a race correctly a little more challenging - whether you do that by obscuring the flow a bit more, by making parts of the flow tougher to pull off, or something else, is up to you.
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2012-08-10
omfg.
My picture fails. Now I found where you have to go. Nevermind this pic. I failed.
:D
:D
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2012-08-10
Oh, sorry.
Submitted my comment 2 times.
I'm sorry.
I'm sorry.
2012-08-10
I don't know why,
but I like you. :D
I also like this race. This is so good for your first one. I am really surprised. My first race was so much worse.
The flow wasn't choppy, only at this place:
You could make this better.
But really, you're good. Keep race-mapping. ;)
Here, my first race http://www.nmaps.net/215695 [nmaps.net].
You can also check out my latest races if you want to.
I'll give this map a 5.
I also like this race. This is so good for your first one. I am really surprised. My first race was so much worse.
The flow wasn't choppy, only at this place:
You could make this better.
But really, you're good. Keep race-mapping. ;)
Here, my first race http://www.nmaps.net/215695 [nmaps.net].
You can also check out my latest races if you want to.
I'll give this map a 5.
2012-08-10
I don't know why,
but I like you. :D
I also like this race. This is so good for your first one. I am really surprised. My first race was so much worse.
The flow wasn't choppy, only at this place:
You could make this better.
But really, you're good. Keep race-mapping. ;)
Here, my first race http://www.nmaps.net/215695 [nmaps.net].
You can also check out my latest races if you want to.
I'll give this map a 5.
I also like this race. This is so good for your first one. I am really surprised. My first race was so much worse.
The flow wasn't choppy, only at this place:
You could make this better.
But really, you're good. Keep race-mapping. ;)
Here, my first race http://www.nmaps.net/215695 [nmaps.net].
You can also check out my latest races if you want to.
I'll give this map a 5.
2012-08-10
:(
Any suggestions?
2012-08-10
flow is really choppy
i didn't really like it.
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2012-08-10
AGD
For said race.
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Nudel_
Oh and,