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Author	LUKESV
Tags	author:lukesv race rated
Created	2010-09-25
Last Modified	2010-09-25
Rating	3 by 12 people.
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Description	My first race - suggestions welcome

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koipen

2010-11-04

Needs polish. While the structure is actually very innovative, the map suffers from execution. The right side, for example would need a oneway more to be reliable.

But I like the fact that you need to control the ninja, not just go with it. It is also quite challenging.

The aesthetics could have used lot of polish. While the left side is quite nice, the curves don't seem to melt with the landscape, making this somewhat tacked on looking

So yeah. This again shows your main problem: lack of polish. You could go long way if you applied it nice and lot.

andreas_xx

2010-09-26

hmm... very confusing flow... try keeping it more simpel without too many direction-changes... also try making a nice gold pattern. 3 golds next to each other doesn't look nice..
i really disliked the top right because of the sudden stop... since its your first race i'll give it a 3..

nDEAVOUR

2010-09-26

Speedrun!

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mc_george

2010-09-26

Aesthetics was weird.

So weird that it felt right. 3/5

nDEAVOUR

2010-09-26

Don't like launchpads which change flow. But I'm the one that gets this a public rate so yay! 3.5^

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Sunset

2010-09-25

this was cool.

a bit hard to find the flow. high 3, if that makes sense.

Ferox

2010-09-25

Long time no see, man. Glad to have you back! :D

LUKESV

2010-09-25

AGD

I'm hoping this gets at least 1 rate

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