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Author	the_puzzler
Tags	author:the_puzzler rated test
Created	2009-09-21
Last Modified	2009-09-21
Rating	4 by 7 people.
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Description	My first map. Yes, it's terrible. I know, but, do you have any tips? Any ideas? Any requests? Or you just just wanna tell me how bad it sucks, feel free to! Anyways, please comment and tell me what you think! Enjoy the_puzzler

to get warmed up for your other maps.

This is good, nice flow and concepts.

Those could be much better though. I like the inside of the tower, those jumps are good.

Almost all the mines were superfluous, and could be replaced by tiles or other objects. same for the doors.

lots of potential.

3.5/5 up for your first.

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the_puzzler

2009-09-22

WOW

Thanks, good speed run!

chume14

2009-09-22

speedrun

good for a first

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the_puzzler

2009-09-21

Thanks guys

Thanks guys.
I really appreciate the feedback!
I was expecting a lot more criticism. this is great!
The tips really help!
Thanks again.
the_puzzler

Jawbit

2009-09-21

not bad for a first

I think you get the idea of a tileset. What most new mappers don't realize is that tilesets dont have to be symmetrical to be good. The doors and the mines are a bit ugly, but you'll start to grasp how to combine pleasing visuals and good gameplay. Welcome to numa, looking forward to seeing your next map! 4/5

Pyrocheese

2009-09-21

well

welcome to numa

not horrible, i don't think. i just don't think that the trapdoor is necessary, as exemplified in my demo

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My first map

Comments

Here's some speed,

WOW

speedrun

Thanks guys

not bad for a first

well