i do have several going at the moment, i think, but we can certainly start. i'll pm you, if you're on the forums.

that didn't fit well with the objects. aesthetically mostly ugly. gold and mines especially weren't themed well; also too close together at times, killing speed. enemy placement was a bit off--chaingun was kind of ineffective, gausses didn't do much.

don't think i'm picking on you, i just wanted to give a detailed critique to make up for my sketchy comments on your last map. it may seem a little harsh, but i'm just trying to help.

I give it a 3 (above average). its a little better than a 3, but not a 4 because looks and gameplay werent fantastic but still decent.

maybe a little bit of spammed mines. but still a 3.5^.

this was pretty tough for me. what chume was saying, i wasnt sure what the best flow would be for the first room. then after getting the exit switch, getting up is simply riding up the thwumps. i liked the feeling you could go multiple routes though. the objects looked a little odd (specially when gold and mines are that close to each other) but the tiles are decent.. salright

good stuff.

for a race you should never stop moving fast. Maybe a flow demo would help sill a pretty nice map. Could you check out mine please :)