i owned on 2;03 monday 2009 !!!!

I have to agree with Booster on everything, but especially, try and go for the minimum. If a stage needs (for example) several thwumps, putting down a whole tun in one area only makes the stage lag; go for as few thwumps as you can while still having the same challenge. Now that you've finished reading all of this (bla) I'd like to say GOOD JOB ON YOUR FIRST MAP!!!

"yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

you might have to change it 'cause it's hard not easy =)

You nearly have the same name as _destiny^-
Welcome to NUMA, I wouldn't have expected anything more like this for a first.
I kept getting shot at the start, and as nearly all first maps, really hard.
Some advice: 2 maps are the MAX on a hot page, people don't like getting knocked off. In a map don't put more than 10 Gauss Turrets in one spot or for slow computers it will lag.
Try to put gold in hard-to-get spots. Test your maps first to see if they're possible. Don't copy maps right out of the game. I did it for my first map and this is what the said "Don't copy maps straight out of N, it's not cool and it makes you look stupid and lazy." Pretty harsh, but I was just testing how to put maps on NUMA.

This map was better than my first... 3/5