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Author lotiso
Tags author:lotiso incomplete race short unrated
Created 2009-01-20
Last Modified 2009-01-20
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Description my first race. please go easy on the comments... suggestions. Edits to come.

-edits posted will be greatly appreciated and credited-

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3/5

fun, but don't add too many objects

wow.

nice playthrough! what key do you have jump mapped to to jump that fast?

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try and make the map more open (not so many tunnels) then u will be able to use both sides of a block of tileset rather than one...

i try and make the ninjas path cross over a place where hes already passed

you know,

i atually agree. i tried to cut down on objects, but it took from the orig. design. the flow was the main point of the race, but i like some difficulty... again. if you can post an edit to this, i will credit you, and i would really like pro help. i want to add length to this map, but i had a brain fart. if you have any design or object placement ideas, i would greatly appreciate them!

not too bad

there were way too many objects i think and try to use more tile variations (less 4 and 8 tiles) ill give it a 3 for ur first map

look at my recent race map for tile and gameplay ideas,
plz rate and comment while ur at it :D
heres the url.

http://nmaps.net/154003
but:
It's short
Lots of object spamming/unnessecary stuff.
Bad atmosphere. I don't think this would be too bad if you worked on improving the aesthetics a bit.

Oh yeah

and "suggestions" is the title of a song on the album that also just so happens to be my avatar :P +1 for that; 3/5
Less is more. Btw, writing words with mines is almost always a bad idea, just so you know. Just offering feedback :)