mind lag
Author | lotiso |
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Tags | author:lotiso incomplete race short unrated |
Created | 2009-01-20 |
Last Modified | 2009-01-20 |
Rating | 2 more votes required for a rating. |
Map Data | |
Description | my first race. please go easy on the comments... suggestions. Edits to come.
-edits posted will be greatly appreciated and credited- |
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2009-01-20
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try and make the map more open (not so many tunnels) then u will be able to use both sides of a block of tileset rather than one...
i try and make the ninjas path cross over a place where hes already passed
i try and make the ninjas path cross over a place where hes already passed
2009-01-20
not too bad
there were way too many objects i think and try to use more tile variations (less 4 and 8 tiles) ill give it a 3 for ur first map
look at my recent race map for tile and gameplay ideas,
plz rate and comment while ur at it :D
heres the url.
http://nmaps.net/154003
look at my recent race map for tile and gameplay ideas,
plz rate and comment while ur at it :D
heres the url.
http://nmaps.net/154003
2009-01-20
Actually, it flows pretty nicely
but:
It's short
Lots of object spamming/unnessecary stuff.
Bad atmosphere. I don't think this would be too bad if you worked on improving the aesthetics a bit.
It's short
Lots of object spamming/unnessecary stuff.
Bad atmosphere. I don't think this would be too bad if you worked on improving the aesthetics a bit.
2009-01-20
Oh yeah
and "suggestions" is the title of a song on the album that also just so happens to be my avatar :P +1 for that; 3/5
2009-01-20
Way too many objects
Less is more. Btw, writing words with mines is almost always a bad idea, just so you know. Just offering feedback :)
2009-01-20
you didn't need the launchpad
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garfield50
3/5