It's nice.

dont delist this, but make another map with the exact same tiles but with a gauss and mine jumper theme like you said. if it turns out better than this map, then you may very well have found your calling and you can continue making maps of the exact same 'style' (make them a little different) and you'll pick up little tricks along the way to make them better. i havent yet found a style of my own, but i've made some pretty darn good maps that have very creative concepts. do that :D

there are few exceptions to that personal rule of mine and i know you can relist them, but to delist a map is basically deleting it and i dont think anyone should delete their maps just because they're bad. (again, there are exceptions to that, but not very many) if you delist your maps, then when you become a famous mapmaker, nobody can go back and see how you made it that far. would'nt you like to see the first map of the best mapmaker on Numa? i would.

especially executed like that expecially executed like that from a not-entirely-experienced-author. lucky for you, i will not rate for it would be biased. for a first map, this is good, but only because about %70 of first maps are really really lame and/or impossible. this is a standard map, which makes it good. its special. congratulations.

but, 4/5 :)