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First Race Map

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Author nickwixon
Tags author:nickwixon unrated
Created 2008-04-28
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Description This is my first race map. It's not the greatest. Maybe they will get better in the future. Opinions? Ideas? Suggestions?

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Woops

I meant to post a replay. And thanks for the CC
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Demo :D

well, this is FAR beyond my first.

good points:

Flow was alright through most of the race
Path was inventive
Not repetative

Points to be improved upon:

Gold was boring - you dont have to use it as a guide
Tiles were (mostly) plain - spice them up a bit
Flow was confusing - open can be good, but it's difficult to pull it off right.

Overall i think you did a great job for you first and practice makes perfect - make more, and you will improve ^^

3.5
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I like the start...

But after that, I had a difficult time finding the flow and/or where to go.

Like SkyRay said, a demo would be good.

Post a demo please.