Mad Monkey Falls
Author | longvie |
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Tags | author:longvie longvie playable race rated |
Created | 2008-01-15 |
Last Modified | 2008-01-15 |
Rating |
3 by 6 people.
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Description | One of my best (if not my best) for me. Reminds me of The crazy miner. Have fun!
PS: If you use NReality, dont use black ninja! PSS: Oh yes, download NReality from here: http://metanet.2.forumer.com/index.php?showtopic=19543 |
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2008-01-17
Me likes =D
This map was pretty good. The only problem I have with it is the big jump, but lots of other people can probably do that jump easily.
2008-01-15
This keeps happening
can be fixed by using a trapdoor instead of a hidden one-way
anyways, now for some more constructive critisizm :P
the map at first is just a bunch of loops - this is generally considered noobish in a race, try not to use loops as much as possible, and if you do use them, make them broken, almost unnoticable.
The part up the right could be improved, as you do eventually go too fast to be able to double-jump it right, the slope could be extended to prevent that.
The drops on the bottom just before the right-side are rough, the hidden one-ways don't do the flow any favours, and just to make it look like your gonna hit the mines? not worth the trade-off
No gold! ninjas love gold! there is no gold!
and you have filled in the tiles - looks in races are important, just filling it in is kinda noobish
the route is not very creative either, if you drew it out as a line, it would be pretty plain.
3.5/5 not your best, but your flow is getting better, keep it up!
anyways, now for some more constructive critisizm :P
the map at first is just a bunch of loops - this is generally considered noobish in a race, try not to use loops as much as possible, and if you do use them, make them broken, almost unnoticable.
The part up the right could be improved, as you do eventually go too fast to be able to double-jump it right, the slope could be extended to prevent that.
The drops on the bottom just before the right-side are rough, the hidden one-ways don't do the flow any favours, and just to make it look like your gonna hit the mines? not worth the trade-off
No gold! ninjas love gold! there is no gold!
and you have filled in the tiles - looks in races are important, just filling it in is kinda noobish
the route is not very creative either, if you drew it out as a line, it would be pretty plain.
3.5/5 not your best, but your flow is getting better, keep it up!
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2008-01-15
great, 4/5
pretty much what PsychoSnail said, but I think the tileset looks fine. and your "pss" should be "P.P.S.".. "PSS" means "post script script...
2008-01-15
Pretty good: 4/5.
Flows pretty well, except that I don't like the big jump at the top, since I almost always die from the fall. The tileset could look nicer also.
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2008-01-15
Looks Great!
I'll be sure to try it out immediately and rate! one minute!
TheOwnage
Longvie