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Author	longvie
Tags	author:longvie dda longvie playable rated
Created	2008-01-03
Last Modified	2008-01-03
Rating	4 by 8 people.
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Description	My first DDA, enjoy. And by the way, its not a dda with 4598 launchpads and gold everywhere.

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Mental Abstinence	Till the end of the days	Speedarald	Bahamuth	_Destiny^-	Diff'rent Strokes

Hey, you commented my level earlier and I just wanted to say that I'm going to repost with a demo and a fix. I noticed one point where its near-impossible to get up a cirtain shaft. +, I'm working out a few bugs on the keep-right-dda at the end.

shan1392

2008-01-04

OMG

This cant be ure first DDA!! It's too good for a gud DDA!

5/5

Cryptic

2008-01-03

Comments

This is definitely good for a first DDA. It's got lots of enemies, a solid variety of propulsion methods, and is of a decent length.

Try to avoid having useless enemies. The gauss turret, for example, didn't fire even once. Even though you had five rockets, they tended to merge paths and didn't have many close calls with the ninja. Concentrate more on really incorporating the enemies rather than having a lot of them.

Also, as LordofPeanuts mentioned, trap door chains are also to be avoided.

LordOfPeanuts

2008-01-03

Great

for your first. 4. Next time try to keep the rockets from bunching up, also try not to use so many rows of trap doors. Having long lines of those is almost as bad as having launchpads. Other than that its really good, so keep at it.

_destiny^-

2008-01-03

but im no DDA pro...

you should check out some of clifty's stuff, they're insane.

i've only done 1 and a half DDA's anyway ^^

_destiny^-

2008-01-03

if you do tiles last,...

they are difficult to insert without effecting enemies or the ninja

longvie

2008-01-03

why tiles first?

_destiny^-

2008-01-03

3.5

all it needed was close calls

for a DDA, you need to do tiles first (unless its KRA)
then enemies
THEN do propulsion and stuff, then you control how close it gets to the enemies and you can make N dodge them ^^

b3njamin

2008-01-03

hmm 3/5

1. variety of propulsion +1
2. about 975 frames +0.5
3. it's your first +1
4. here and there close calls +1
5. the end was lame -0.5

Mr_Smeagol

2008-01-03

heh

I think I would give you 3.5 if this was just some dda but since it's your first and this good then I think you deserve at least 4. But i'm gonna give you 4.5 to encourage you ^^

I like the map :)

longvie

2008-01-03

thanks.

but if this wasnt my first, does it really deserve a 2.5?
also, did you rate it?

miscellaneous

2008-01-03

...

that was quite decent, variety of propulsion (+1), about 975 frames (+1), unfortunately, not as many enemies as most authors would like to see (-.5), also first (+1)...

starting at a base of 1 which i do for all maps, 3.5/5

congatulations, that is quite possibly the best first dda ive ever seen...