NUMA

2nd map

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Author travis_n
Tags action author:travis_n hard-ish playable unrated
Created 2007-11-21
Last Modified 2007-11-23
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Description Sorry for the lack of objects this is only my second map so im still kinda just getting the hang of it.

Today is November 23 2007 and i made my first n art today, it is a tribute to one of my favorite bands trivium (which is the name of the map)

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Not bad at all

That top-left thwump really bugs me, though. I can't seem to get past it. There are too many zap drones in the corridors also.
There also aren't enough enemies in many places, and many of the guasses don't do much. You need to make sure the enemies add a degree of challenge and fun to the map, but don't make it too hard either.
I like the rest of it, though. Overall, I'll give this a 3.5 - it's certainly much better than some other people, and you didn't do the n00b object-spamming, but it isn't outstanding, either. But it's still good for a second map.

Btw, this would probably be an action more than it would be a race.

Good for a 2nd map

Some tips:
-Put enemies where they affect gameplay more.
-Cut down on unnecessary objects (all those drones?)
-Make sure the level is possible before submitting (top-left thwump?)
-Hidden enemies are generally frowned upon.

Overall, much better than a typical 2nd map. You're not doing the typical "I'll out 5000 pieces of gold here because it'll sound cool when I jump through it!" thing.

Keep making maps! NR.