About modded jump-pads being frowned upon. For example the top rated map on numa, 'The Crazy Miner', uses at least one to my knowledge. I would say, be VERY careful how you use them, as they are almost always considered tacky.

But pretty much what Maximo said apart from that was what I think. Keep them coming. This isn't half bad at all.

ditto what maximo said. Also, i dont really see the point of massing gold where you have to go. I see no point. It was still a good map though. Oh yeah, it's also nice to have a bit more flow.

good ideas but... don't mod jump pads, it's frownd apon in action maps. Also, make your maps shorter, this was a bit too long. Try not to make it seem like you do one part then the next then the next, make maps where it's all one big part. Also, try to clean up your tiles, the top right looks out of place with the rest of the map. I'm not trying to say it was a bad map, it was a decent map but you asked for ways to improve. Play some of LittleViking001 and Tktktk's maps to see what I mean by one big part.