spontaneous internal combustion

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Author	lemon007
Tags	author:lemon007 playable race unrated
Created	2007-04-15
Rating	4 more votes required for a rating.
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Description	i made a map tell me if it needs editing constuctive critisism please

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Remus

2007-05-11

Make it longer...

Right now there is a lot of open space. Add more loops and stuff.

SnailsRule

2007-04-15

The beginning needs more flow. N falls too fast, so he doesn't reach the end of the roof-ramp thingy. Fix that. Try adding a chaingun or so, but don't add a laser. A gauss in the small space with the exit switch might be good. Add a few more rockets.

Fbf'd AGD, btw. NR.

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TheBlackPlague

2007-04-15

A bit simple

No really close calls, or anything really super-dangerous. I don't know how you would do it, but perhaps putting some gold in there at least for the aesthetic effect or some rockets chasing your or something like that would make it a bit more lively and interesting. It flows quite well, but there's just not enough going on.

Completion demo...there's no gold, so it can't be an AGD.

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