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Right where it belongs

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Author bluenin
Tags author:bluenin bitesized dda rated
Created 2006-12-30
Rating
4
by 78 people.
Map Data

Description see the animal in his cage that you built
are you sure what side you're on?
better not look him too closely in the eye
are you sure what side of the glass you are on?
see the safety of the life you have built
everything where it belongs
feel the hollowness inside of your heart
and it's all
right where it belongs
what if all the world's inside of your head
just creations of your own?
your devils and your gods all the living and the dead
and you're really all alone
you can live in this illusion
you can choose to believe
you keep looking but you can't find the woods
while you're hiding in the trees
what if everything around you
isn't quite as it seems?
what if all the world you think you know
is an elaborate dream?
and if you look at your reflection
is that you want it to be?
what if you could look right through the cracks
would you find yourself,
find yourself afraid to see?

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Comments

I give this

a fiiiiiive out of fiiiiive.

aye mama....

MY HEAD IS STILL SPINNING! oh u n00bs shut up its definetely t BEST DDA i ev seen. i know iv said thisto a lot t lots of different DDA's but so far this is the best! 50/5. LOL i luv ur DDA's bluenin. PS teh poem is good and like teh other guy said did u write it?
~J3ZZA~

@Clifty

I actually lol'ed. =o

Back to the DDA: Awesome. But I got bored, since it's so long. But it's awesome anyway. 4.5.

z33r0

If you're spending hours of end watching these DDAs and writing generic comments...well then you are wasting your time. Sorry but I think that you are a total bitch. I rate you 0/5.

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if your spending hours of end creating this type of generic ddas...well then you are wasting your time. sry but i think this is way too overrated. 2/5
very deep. did you make it?

Oh, bonzai...

The drones were for me, not for you. They provided quite a challenge for me while I made it. Do you have any idea how much they limited the directions I could move in, with out screwing the whole thing? Not to mention how tiles and doors would mess w/them.
With out those drones, I would have easily been able to get at least 1500f more.

it was intense to begin with, and then i became just another repetitive dda.

What?

Who compared this to Doors V?

and...

its DEFINITELY not better than doors v

im sorry...

but i fail to see what's so good about it, no more than a 4

4/5

The good: Nice close calls for most of it, rockets never got clumped, nice length, decent flow
The bad: Not enough propulsion variety, somewhat useless drones, boring start and finish
Suggestions: Try to keep the ninja from what I call "twitching". That is what happens when you try to jump over something and you just barely catch the corner and makes the ninja look like it twitches. This should improve the flow. Try to put variety into your propulsion efforts. People always comment on having too jump pads in DDAs but I say it applies to any propulsion usage being used too much and that was the case with trap doors in this DDA. Try to stick enemies in that will actually create near death experiences and, if possible, you could make even more peoples' jaws drop in awe. Last, but definitely not least, start strong and dangerous and finish with a bang.

Nice

No launchpads or gold delay.

*Reads other posts*

It seems like more people than I first saw feel the same way.

This map is therefore like Marmite.
And not in the sticky brown sh*t way.
This is good. At first. Techinically impressive, but so long that your brain falls out. Also, the end lacks close calls, due to insane amount of locked doors that have formed, which makes me think that the end should have been repositioned, which would also combat the length thing too.
And the weapons were a bit drab. I would've loved to have seen a couple of laser crawling around.

4 nonetheless.

Super Fast Ninja...

Man... this map is awesome! I can't even believe the length! This definitly deserves a 5/5

wait a sec,

do you have two DDAs over 5000 frames?

wow

about sums it up...how anyone could possiblly call it boring is beyond me. the only boring thing about it is you do nothing while watching it, but thats what dont do anythings are all about, so it you find it boring, play a different type.
its defintly flawless excelent 5/5 for ur hard work!!

WOW!

thats all i can really say about a DDA that amazing... 5aved 2 million times!

Wow.

This is some pro shit. 5aved. If only I could bitesize this a million times.

I

agree with astimefliesby, not enough close calls... 4.5 sorry!
Thank you everybody for the comments. KinGAleX, your right, it really is pretty boring watching it without the rush of finally finishing it. You too Jakel.
mr. x, theres no such thing as a DDA thats too long, well, there might be some noobish exceptions.
IAABH, I'll stop when I make one thats 8000 frames, only because I dont think any longer than that is possible. Dont worry though, I won't get that done for a long time.
lord_zecrus, just about everything in this is so tight that its hard to add gold without screwing things up.

I think that Clifty, lord_day, bufar and romaniac actually appreciated it for what is: a very long DDA with precision tolerances. Thanks, you four.

uNcoNditioNal: "tedious"?

torigu, you're absolutely right.

Obviously, I cant reply to everybody, and to those who I didnt mention, I really appreciate your comments and votes, in that order.

Jaw-Dropping.

Cant believe everyone else is saying its too long ?=(
Before they were saying it was too short.
Definitely 5/5 and worthy of its top-rated status.
NIce length too.

AWESOME

best dda map played 5/5

That is Impressive

very long and lots of close calls 5aved!!!

shiny...

6aved. lol... :P

that

was totally awsome

BEST EVER

5aved
It had quite a few close calls and I like the length, but there were too many slow parts meaning... it's not as action-packed as I'd like it to be.
But still nice. 4.5

Nice

length

Great

Amazing rocket effect. Amazing length, long but skillful. It slowed down a bit in the end unforetuneatly due to all the trap doors. 4.5, great job.

4.5/5aved

Very impressive. But a little on the tedious side in some parts. All in all though, great job.

now,

I'm not much of a DDA fan, but this is rather immpressive. over 5000 frames... damn! Get a life ;)
5/5

3.5/5

Pretty boring, but technically impressive.
so you can play it in user levels

4.5aved

This DDA is interesting. And a DDA can`t be too long as long as it holds your interest. It is not the best DDA I ahve ever seen, but it is way up there. Good job man. And if it makes you feel better, I have no life either.

sweet

kinda laggy but very very nice 4.5