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Flying in a Blue Dream

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Author amconline
Tags author:amconline playable race rated
Created 2006-08-14
Rating
4
by 13 people.
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Description My first Racing map.
Enjoy.

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But after watching you demo, its quite good

Good for a first...

Here's my suggestions from my bag of tricks.

First, try a few more larger curves. Although you can build a good race out of "4" tiles, it becomes much more interesting once you add larger curves. Second, work on the flow a bit. Try to use less jumping off one-ways, because you have to be much more precise with your jumping, and it can become annoying.

Okay, enough criticism. Nice map, I hope to see more good maps from you.

Nice map

heres a demo
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wow

id have to say this is real nice for a first... i remember my first race... i wish i would forget it though :/ but anyways nicely done 4.5

weird

but i liked it for a first

4aved

almost

you have some parts that are a bit out :
once you are on the thwump coming up, you have to wait for 1 second, and the next part comes by itself. watch my demo ! :)
so tell me if my completion is right
the flow is good
good for a first map. 4/5
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AGD

Enjoy, and beat it...
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i cant figure out the flow