NUMA

Race #2

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Author bluenin
Tags author:bluenin playable race rated
Created 2006-08-11
Rating
3
by 6 people.
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Description My second attempt at a race level. I please let me know what I need to do to improve.

PS. Did anyone notice that Numa's almost at 10000 members? The most recent I've noticed is #9991.

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And

I apologize for all of the excess doors. It really bothered me having to put them there.

Well,

Thanks guys. As for originality, I'm still try to get the flow concept down, how it all works and that. I'll try to make a demo in a little bit.
BTW, my left arrow key just broke :(
You might not hitting jumps dejablue. I love pace of this map. And I agree with dejablue with the originality thing. Too many of these styled races are coming up these days. Maybe try for something more abstract next time?
Overall, good effort. 4/5
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hmm

its pretty good... flow loses place in a couple places, or maybe im just not hitting the jumps right... but its good

oh and btw, if you're going to start making races more often then i suggest you try for originality... thats what most people want in a race these days... just a suggestion though, keep it up 4/5

i cant tell

what do yu need to improve
the mines of the third loop we pass are too close from the loop ( i think...)