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| Author | virii |
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| Tags | action author:virii playable rated |
| Created | 2006-07-17 |
| Rating |
4 by 12 people.
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| Description | Hello, this is my first map on NUMA. I have not made many maps
before, just maybe 2 or 3. I would like to know how I can get better at making levels. if you can comment on the map and rate it, I would really appreciate it. |
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2006-07-17
4
very nice, and welcome to numa
but i think its overrated because your new. But still, feel free to make more good maps
but i think its overrated because your new. But still, feel free to make more good maps
2006-07-17
Nice Challenge!
Heres a AGD... Shows some pretty good flow in your level, I just messed up on a few jumps.
5/5 from me
5/5 from me
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2006-07-17
good first level
the tileset and chaingun are both nice. but the two floor-guards on the arms are slightly akward.
but still, nice job for a first.
(hav u a cooky)
but still, nice job for a first.
(hav u a cooky)
2006-07-17
That is one good level
well done!
expecting to see good maps! :D
expecting to see good maps! :D
2006-07-17
a survivals
is usually a level where theres no exit and it turns into a competition of who can survive the longest without dying
2006-07-17
thanks guys...for the ratings..
how can I get better?
2006-07-17
good
not a horrible new guy :) nice map 4/5 and about making future levels... well yea u can look at some of my past levels... most of the recent ones have been races... but if u have any questions just ask
2006-07-17
welcome to NUMA
cool, another new guy that makes decent maps.. 4.5/5
astheoceansblue
Hint:
Make sure the drone you want to edit is the last object you have placed, then click inside the level data bxand remove the very last number and replace it with the letters: NaN
Then click outside the box and press L to load and save the edited data. The drone will now remain rooted.
As for the map. you've avoided a lot of the problems new makers run into, ie: spammed objects, messy design, no continuity or cohesion... but it does feel s lttle sparse. There's not much going on and what you have got isn't terribly interesting. Still, it's clean and works exactlly as it should.
2.5/5
Look at som other authors and see how they've developed their own styles and themes. I'd recommend: tktktk, littleviking001, blue_tetris, stepself, yhoozy_guacamole, krusch, nevermore and barabajagal.
There are plenty of other great authors, but these in particular have developed a real sense of their own style.
Good to have you on board.