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choking on a dream

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Author wishyouwerehere
Tags action author:wishyouwerehere playable rated
Created 2006-06-12
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4
by 18 people.
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Description this is my first map...plz rate and comment...

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ok then

sorry about the misunderstanding. It is a good map.

4.5/5

Oh-

And on the rather likely chance that all made me sound rather condescending, arrogant and all that... It wasn't meant to. I just want to see you make more maps. :P

5/5!

A great, great map. Very good aesthetics (even if I have one or two small complaints involving the double mines), very fun, and very well made. Some original, well used ideas in here, too- The exit switch hidden thing WORKED in this level, which is more than you can say about the bulk of levels which use the idea.

I like the gold in the bounce blocks, myself, but you _could_ use c- snap; Just press 'c' whilst in Ned and you'll get a greater range of positions to place objects. You can use Z, too, but it tends to look rather tacky.

Anyway, this is a great map, especially for a first map. I certainly look forward to watching your map- making courier develop!

thank u

>stardeash

@ Mr_Mongoose

i see how you could think that this was one of my maps but it's not...it is slightly similar to one but its not the same and not a redone version...it's completely this dude's map...and i think it's fun to play...and i agree with slain_wraith...the cave to the open area is fun...but plz dont hide the door switch like that...you should usually have it in the open so ppl can see it...but overall it's a good map and i give it a 4.5/5....

>stardeash
use someone else's map...
try this one http://numa.notdot.net/map/41073 .

Fun!

not great, but very good, especially for a first. I do have a few minor complaints. First, you should never hide the exit switch. In this map, it was easy to find, but it's just nicer to know where it is. Next, I didn't like how the gold was embedded in the bounce blocks. You should set them a c-snap off, just for the looks. Finally, I thought four gauss turrets were a bit much, but that could just be my pathetic skills. Overall, good job!
and NO, i didnt use anyone else's stuff