My first map
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| Author | viper093 |
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| Tags | author:viper093 playable puzzle unrated |
| Created | 2006-01-15 |
| Rating | 2 more votes required for a rating. |
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| Description | This is my first map, and I don't really know much of the ropes to n-ed, but I did this, and I hope that you'll give me tips on this. Demos are great too!
Rate what you want. I don't really mind. |
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2006-01-14
Very Good for a first.
But I agree with bigblargh, you should try to make you levels with as little gold as needed...
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2006-01-14
Okay, here's what I have to say.
There was too much gold. Some you couldn't even get.
You put bouncy blocks in tiles. That's kinda weird and not needed.
You hid a trap door. Don't do that. Don't hide anything. Hiding a thwump in a wall is bad, even.
You didn't do this, but for future maps: There is something called clustering. This is where you put a ton of an item in one place. Badbadbadbad.
Your tileset wasn't amzing, but for that, just be artistic. :)
I give it a 2/5. Hope you make more maps soon. I think you'll be perty good.
You put bouncy blocks in tiles. That's kinda weird and not needed.
You hid a trap door. Don't do that. Don't hide anything. Hiding a thwump in a wall is bad, even.
You didn't do this, but for future maps: There is something called clustering. This is where you put a ton of an item in one place. Badbadbadbad.
Your tileset wasn't amzing, but for that, just be artistic. :)
I give it a 2/5. Hope you make more maps soon. I think you'll be perty good.
2006-01-14
OMFGZORZ!!
Wow. It's great to have a new face around here that encourages and listens to constructive critisim. (Pardon my horrible spelling :D)
Playing this map... Now.
Playing this map... Now.
viper093
Thanks guys!