05-0: Peaches and Diesel
Author | Diamondeye |
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Tags | 05-0 andallthatjazz author:diamondeye chaingun episode floorguards unrated |
Created | 2010-03-16 |
Last Modified | 2010-03-16 |
Rating | 3 more votes required for a rating. |
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Description | A really nice map imho. Sort of split into two different halves, a peaceful and enemy-less left with lots of gold and the more rough and dangerous but necessary right.
Like peaches and diesel, coincidentally. |
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2010-03-16
It should be a simple map.
Less is more.
2010-03-16
Tilted gold
is win. You used the chaingun like a true master.
origami_alligator
My apologies, diamondeye
My opinion of the Review still stands. I think you should take a look at this [321southpaw.deviantart.com] for some great authors (and some not-so-great authors :P ) to help find some really interesting maps with great mechanics.
Beyond that, I'd start reading some poetry to get a different take on sentence structure and form.
I guess in the future try to describe the map but in an interesting and sometimes metaphorical way.