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Deepdown Trauma Hounds

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Author Tryptafeind
Tags action author:tryptafeind fun spelunking unrated
Created 2010-03-08
Last Modified 2010-03-08
Rating 4 more votes required for a rating.
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Description Injured plea crushed destiny
deep down trauma hounds run to corrode integrity
whatever matters- and it would
they fail to see they make believe
reality helpless deaths ignored
to be judged as juvenile head caves in
growing pains
no time remains
for fantasy tyranny

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astheoceansblue
2010-04-06

Much like your other map.

There's just too much gold. After one cache the rest seems far too laborious.

It's just too bland. Take out all the gold and rearrange it in more pleasing to collect/aesthetic patterns and you'll have improved this twice over already.

Add some Bounceblocks or launchpads to mix up the play, perhaps. Something like that.

I always try to give a variety of options for traversing the environment, it lends your map a replay value as each time can potentially be a different experience.