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Author	spragueles
Tags	author:spragueles first hard map rated
Created	2009-12-06
Last Modified	2009-12-06
Rating	3 by 6 people.
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Description	My First Map!!!!!!!

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Luigi281

2010-08-01

wow

hidden traps make it un-fun

sniperassassin

2010-03-19

Eh

How the hell is this rated 4/5?

AMomentLikeThis

2009-12-06

This isn't fun

Read what ChrisE said in parts 1 and 2.
1.

ChrisE

2009-12-06

Okay. Here's some constructive criticism.

1. Try not to place more enemies than needed. A lot of mines on this map are spammed.

2. Hidden enemies are usually a no-no. People get annoyed. The same goes for hidden traps.

3. Try to make the tiles look good, a lot of people start off with "room" maps, so try to let the ninja roam about more freely.

All in all, it's actually a nice map. I'm sure you will improve.

SeventhSpirit

2009-12-06

And

since it's your first map, 4/5

SeventhSpirit

2009-12-06

Woah woah woah

calm down with the mine placement there buddy! First of all, WELCOME TO NUMA! And second of all, your map should be something unique, not that this ISN'T unique, but don't make everything so squished in, make some room for everything else. View someother people's maps. I'll give some examples.

blackson [nmaps.net]
AMomentLikeThis [nmaps.net]
flagmyidol [nmaps.net]

and many many more.

Echelon

Comments

wow

i liked the mine feild.

lololololololol

Eh

This isn't fun

Okay. Here's some constructive criticism.

And

Woah woah woah