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Author	H-Maniac86
Tags	author:h-maniac86 easy fun medium playable simple unrated
Created	2009-08-12
Last Modified	2009-08-12
Rating	1 more votes required for a rating.
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Description	My First Creation, not too great, i just want some feed back. Thanks.

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maxson924

2009-08-12

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Thanks for the comment, but i never gave you advice that i know of o_O

But if you'd like my advice, i agree with all of furry_ant's comments.

Welcome to NUMA :)

furry_ant

2009-08-12

Damian82x, a 4 rating is way too generous. My rating was too genorous as well.

I mean ATOB gets 4's most of the time. Surely, this doesn't equal in any way an ATOB map.

But it is good for a first anyway.

natures_peril

2009-08-12

got through the top, but the rest of the demo is noobish

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DamiaN82x

2009-08-12

4/5

I really enjoyed this level, before it goes to the mines on the top...

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infernoXV8

2009-08-12

excellent for ur first ever map though

good job :)

infernoXV8

2009-08-12

Too slow

i didnt like the lazer being where it was

natures_peril

2009-08-12

i didnt like the trap door cos it was realy hard to get past the mines, but the rest was good for a first

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furry_ant

2009-08-12

WELCOME TO NUMA

Pretty good for a first.

It's good that you didn't just spam loads of objects like most people when they submit their first map.

Just work on the tileset a bit more and keep on improving.

I will give it a 3.

And have a good time here.

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