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Author	alpha2012
Tags	action author:alpha2012 unrated
Created	2008-12-03
Last Modified	2008-12-03
Rating	2 more votes required for a rating.
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Description	thank you grenise, you helped me so much!

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ChaoStar

2008-12-04

hm...

if it wasn't your first map, I would give it a 2. but, greniswe helped you, so I give you a 2.
...dood. don't listen to grenise much.

alphaniner

2008-12-03

That being said

It's still pretty good. My #1 gripe would be that the rocket just dominates the map too much.

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alphaniner

2008-12-03

Some Pointers

1) You've given us nothing to get past the rocket. You sort of have to shimmy up over the top of that tower to get past it. It's a tad awkward.
2) Hiding stuff (i.e. that gauss) under bounce blocks is generally frowned upon.
3) The drone paths are screwy. Like, /really/ weird.
4) Another note about the rocket. Either give more platforms to work with on the right side of the map, or give better cover from the rocket. (i.e. put some solid tiles over there)

BE_nSPIRED

2008-12-03

Really really good

so much better than my first

grenise

2008-12-03

My First Map!

Comments

hm...

That being said

Some Pointers

Really really good

you're welcome