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Crib

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Author yungerkid
Tags author:yungerkid baby crib flowy innovative race rated
Created 2008-09-14
Last Modified 2008-09-14
Rating
4
by 16 people.
Map Data

Description the hands move in unison
the toys stretch and sound
under the torpid balcony
where once the lovers breathed

the babies now born
to a world of machines
are lost in the scorn
and what it all means.

hughstiaan said he loved my races, and my first reaction was to make another.

this map has the shortest production time of any race i've made to date. i made it in an hour and a half. let me know how the lower right jumps work.

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Thumbnail of the map 'Meditations from a Deep Green Grove' Thumbnail of the map 'Ninepins' Thumbnail of the map 'Uncertainty' Thumbnail of the map 'Zone One-Three' Thumbnail of the map 'The New Machine' Thumbnail of the map 'My Cohorts'
Meditations from a Deep Green Grove Ninepins Uncertainty Zone One-Three The New Machine My Cohorts

Comments

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The feature list isn't for pity reviews, nor to give people a break. It's for honest opinion of what a reviewer considers to be an outstanding map worthy of attention, the social context should not be the defining aspect of the selection.

To make it clear: only review a map if you honestly think the MAP ITSELF is worth the attention.

IMO

it seems as though the reviewer thinks this was just an average map and featured it only to be nice
maybe edit that out of the review?
i think that if the map is featured all these comments should be deleted.

I dunno...

Maybe not mention all of this and let ATOB delete the comments. Only the reviewers saw all this. A review like that shouldn't be up.

:) :)

thanks a million gloomp.
I'd like to ask that it please not be deleted. I know it's not my best work, but let yungerkid have his Feature.

Review deleted

privlege revoked. I'm sorry, but you've obviously not got the maturity the position requires.

Also, account suspended pending review. There seems to be evidence of multi-accounting.

Sorry for the loss of feature.

Everyone knows it.

It's on the forums. And godenator's sick.

Ahem.

Am I the only one who realizes Evil_Sire is a multi-account of godenAtor, when yungerkid complimented the review, Evil_Sire replied saying "Thanks, I spend quite alot of time editing them :)"

?

ahawhaw

lol blackson, @me, gloomp, or godenAtor? hehe.

"gloomp, you're sick for liking the bounceblocks."

"yungerkid, you're sick for making a map themed around babies."

"godenAtor, you're sick for your review."

heh. heh.

Your sick.

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the bounceblocks

were there to enhance the atmosphere. i liked them, but i guess not everyone has that opinion.

O_o

0-0
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Wow.

@gloomp

Roflmao. I was trying to say something like that, couldn't get the words out.

I kinda dislike the bounceblocks, but that was it. =)
"Half the time on this map you end up like Princess Diana; smashed up against a wall and bleeding..."

I appreciate a bad joke, but that's disgusting.
Oh yeah, and learn to spell. Haven't.
You're missing a full stop at the end too. =\

As for the map, very nice. It's a shame that you've ruined it with that comment, godenAtor.

I've

fixed it up

It's much better now

i see...

i'm not going to make a comment on this situation.
The review is the worst I've ever read, anywhere. It's an insult to the map.

O_o

i see. this situation is becoming quite confusing for me.

well this sucks

a was about to write something cool on this map, but then i read the review

@ Evil_Sire

Multi-accounter.

lol

.

Uhm,

what's going on with that feature.

oh yes,

oh yes. i know it. i'm preparing my argument right now ;)

O_O

Psst...I like to keep mine a secret. =)

Congrats yungerkid.

But O_o Controversy is coming. =P

Thanks

I spend quite alot of time editing them :)

holy cow

my first featured map - yay! and a race too! thanks godenAtor!
by the way, i like your reviews. the word choice and general style is pretty unique, and pretty eloquent imho.

I love this

time its featured me-thinks

(and a somewhat crazy review)

blast dangit,

the bounceblocks were supposed to add to the atmosphere. oh well :/

hard

I was able to do it once, but didn't demo it.
Remove the bounceblocks, they kill the whole flow.
Otherwise, pretty good. I liked the gold.

3.5/5

faved

pretty neat

I especially liked the final horizontal dash across the middle.

the bounce blocks in the slope ruined the flow, for me

4
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super-cool

the whole getting the gold half-way and then hitting it again to get the rest of it :)

the few things I didn't like: the bounceblocks, and the very end... that's all I thought it was very fun =)

i liked it,

up until the ramp with the 3 bounceblocks, then it got kinda choppy. but pry good. 3
Since I'm cleaning my pc. He would crash if I start N-game now.
Be back later.....
=D
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it's fast, i like how you get past the rings of gold twice, the enemies were perfect and the mines were too.

5
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thank you very

much!
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