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Author	greenn
Tags	action author:greenn greenn playable race rated
Created	2008-06-19
Last Modified	2008-06-19
Rating	3 by 6 people.
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Description	my first map. my first race. play, rate, and comment, save the earth!

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euroazn

2008-06-20

Very nice

For a first map. I like it, so I would give a 3.5... I think its closer to a three though.

LNKNPRK

2008-06-19

ditto

for both. I'll give this a 3 because I'm feeling generous and because this is WAY better than most people's first maps.

PsychoSnail

2008-06-19

Nice - some parts were kind of awkward and didn't flow very smoothly, but this is way better than most people's first maps. 4/5.

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_destiny^-

2008-06-19

Flow was very confusing and not very smooth

stick at it and i know you will get it!

If you dont believe me, check out my older stuff - my races got better as i went along.

Tips:

Use less gold - 6 or 7 clumps should be enough.
Enemies - more variance, lasers, chainguns, floorguards, drones...
Flow - try to make it a bit more obvious where to go - you just didnt seem to land anywhere specific on some of these jumps.

2/5 - not bad for a first

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