Deicide
Author | simo1slipknot |
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Tags | author:simo1slipknot death deicide heavy metal n-art rated series |
Created | 2008-04-16 |
Rating |
4 by 5 people.
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Description | All you metal fans out there should know this band! Shame on you if you don't! =]
First n-art in my heavy/death metal band series. Just type in "heavy", "death" or metal" to find them. No one please take my idea. I'm very proud of this, the attention and detail in it, please don't rate down just for use of one item, I think it looks better this way. Thanks. =] |
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2008-04-16
the middle is far too scrunched
hard to make out what it is. if you did it yourself then i suggest spreading the letters slightly. if you copied from somewhere then use some artistic lisence and spread them slightly - it will make it look better. not too much mind, only a little.
also to make it look better you could try centering it more and having a tileset pattern/border around it. its too empty at the moment. the one colour thing is fine as long as it isnt too empty (look at my narts - mostly they are only mines)
smoothness of the mines is alright too. ill give this a 3.5 as its a lot better than average but has some way to go yet. i do like it tho - caught the eye.
also to make it look better you could try centering it more and having a tileset pattern/border around it. its too empty at the moment. the one colour thing is fine as long as it isnt too empty (look at my narts - mostly they are only mines)
smoothness of the mines is alright too. ill give this a 3.5 as its a lot better than average but has some way to go yet. i do like it tho - caught the eye.
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i know the band.
anyway, the nart. the use of one item is fine, the art you were doing only needed one colour
the type is okay, but as cossack said, the middle is scrunched.
3.5/5, its better than average but not wonderful.