Films of Evil 1-Theatre of Insanity
Author | TheOwnage |
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Tags | action author:theownage films playable series symmetrical unrated |
Created | 2008-01-17 |
Last Modified | 2008-01-18 |
Rating | 4 more votes required for a rating. |
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Description | pROBELM NEEDS TO BE EDITED ATM
One dark day N was wandering through a strange city. While N was there he decided to find something entertaining to do. As he passed the abandoned restaurants and run-down houses, N quickly saw a theatre. It was the only thing that appeared to be operating and it had humongous lights with an open sign blazing in neon colors. Ofcourse, N decided to go inside and see what was playing. A terrible mistake indeed. As soon as he entered the doors slammed shut immidiatly behind him, almost squishing N into a thousand peices! Then their was a deep voice. "Welcome to my amazing theatre, please pick a movie and have a seat." N noticed a strange thing in the calm and pleasent voice, he felt as if he was being somewhat forced to watch a movie, so he did "Good"said the voice "Now please put 100gold inside the box beside you and be on your way" A box magically appeared next to N. "100 gold!?!? No way im out of this place" Suddenly the voice turned furious "You, a puny human dare to defile me! Do you realize who you are dealing with? Year after year people didnt pay for my movies, so I experimented until I could find a way to become supreme to them, And now you, decide to just enter this place and not pay at all! I've had enough of this. Prepare to die! Suddenly the deep voice cast some kind of magical spell, transforming his theatre into a battle ground. With his face being revealed at the highest section, firing missiles through his eyes that were filled with hatred... When N thought he escaped he froze in horror as he heard the voice say. Congratulations, you are the first of what used to be the inhabitants of this whole city to reach lvl 2... -------- Kudos to Tapp, Templex, and Longvie for giving me feedback on ways to improve this map. If you read this much then you deserve to know that this is only my second map! When you post please give me tips if you can. |
Comments
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2008-01-20
Well
this map is Boring, not addicting, the gold and enemies are badly placed and the tiles look pretty bad.
Fix that and itll be good
Fix that and itll be good
2008-01-17
PS:
if you write a story or something (in the desc) make the map according to it... or at least put something that has to do with it.
First of all:
AESTHETICS: Its the look of the map. Some parts look pretty bad and people dont play the map because of that.
Second:
BORING PARTS: There are some really easy parts that dont do anything, for example the part at the bottom. Its extremely easy to get past it, try using the space for something better.
Third:
CHEATABLE PARTS: There are some parts that are cheatable, for example, see the demo. Fix them ASAP.
Fourth:
ENEMIES: Dont put enemies at a random place. When you play the map, dont put any enemies. See the places that are just plain and boring and try to put the enemy in the place its a real threat. For example, the laser drones: You just get pass through them...
Fifth; last but not least:
GOLD: Put gold where you see its a place hard to reach; not anywhere.
Also, playtest your map until you cant anymore. If you see your map is boring or has some parts that need to be changed/fixed, do it until its really fun. You dont want people to play your map and say "uhhhh boring" and rate a 0.
AESTHETICS: Its the look of the map. Some parts look pretty bad and people dont play the map because of that.
Second:
BORING PARTS: There are some really easy parts that dont do anything, for example the part at the bottom. Its extremely easy to get past it, try using the space for something better.
Third:
CHEATABLE PARTS: There are some parts that are cheatable, for example, see the demo. Fix them ASAP.
Fourth:
ENEMIES: Dont put enemies at a random place. When you play the map, dont put any enemies. See the places that are just plain and boring and try to put the enemy in the place its a real threat. For example, the laser drones: You just get pass through them...
Fifth; last but not least:
GOLD: Put gold where you see its a place hard to reach; not anywhere.
Also, playtest your map until you cant anymore. If you see your map is boring or has some parts that need to be changed/fixed, do it until its really fun. You dont want people to play your map and say "uhhhh boring" and rate a 0.
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